Script.
Throughout our intire script the dialogue only consists of our main character narrating all the way through our opening sequence. He is telling the audience his story aswell as describing the other characters.We felt this would be a more effective way of letting the audience know what sort of character he is, if it's making them feel sympathy for him or the complete opposite it still brings a more personal relationship between the audience and characters.
As we decided to base our theme as film noir our main speaker also tends to talk in riddles. Given this we thought it would make the audience more kean to watch more as the dialogue will be as complicated as it can be leaving the audience guessing.

Script
Eddie Gum: There are many reasons as to why im lieng here now (pause) some Im aware of.
 It all began five weeks back, the seventh of november 1945.
And now I will tell you my story and how it came to an end.
The city has many faces. A close source of mine brought me here to suss out some dodgy deals.
They were closer to me than i'd imagined.
It was those words she spoke so softly that lured me into this mess.
Only time will tell who it is I can trust around these towns.
 How many things this sky has seen is beyond me.
A voice of an angel was pulling me over (pause) but I will not be fooled again.
 I thought I could trust her but the other one with those red lips (pause) she was dangerous.
She held many secrets of her own but some girls you can't help but fall for they just lure you in and you know instantly, your a dead man.
I was in too deep, thought I got the better of them seems that the tables had already turned. Who was I to trust? (pause) the people who I trusted were they on my side?
But Im getting ahead of myself (pause) let me start again.